Feedback on our pitch

Good things and bad things about pitch:

Audience feedback:

• We had good inspiration in our narrative and the storyline has the potential to work well.

• We should consider changing the main character, because the character we decided to be main dies right at the beginning, and the rest of the film continues to center around him. We can continue with this idea, but choose to make the policeman a different main character because there is a chance that the audience could get confused.

• The communication in the group has been claimed to have not been as good as it could have been. I think that the communication is fine, but because someone has said that they don't think it is, we can aim to achiever a higher level of communication to satisfy our audience whilst we are presenting our pitch.

• We plan on doing some filming in town, but that will be in a public place. Some people don't like being filmed in public, so we will make sure everybody is happy around where we are filming and if they don't want to be filmed then we will move places. We also need to be careful about which shops we film inside or just outside because the owners may have a problem with the camera being there.

This blog was created by Toby Moffat, George Tibbett, Graeme Beck and Andrew Thomson.